Monday, July 18, 2011

backspace

i've taken the eraser from my pencil
(that should've been more eloquently stated)
(i shouldn't use adverbs--show, not tell)
(do i have too much punctuation?)
the lead is going to flick out of [crap]
(that doesn't sound good)
thank goodness for backspace
no, that gives away the meaning of the title
well
damn

--fin.

"The key is...just don't edit yourselves. You suck the life out of your writing"

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